Saturday, August 1, 2009

-_Unbelievable_-

Have you ever try to write the story when we start a first sentence for you ?

Today I have a sentence " She came to school today to say she's been okay."

I think it is very interesting....

Can you continue the story from the first sentence and share the story with me?

This is my story from first sentence.

Unbelievable

She came to school today to say she's been okay. I think she was very fortunate that she was one of ten people who can survived from the fall down of Air France in Bermuda Triangle. She told me about the cause that made an aeroplane fall down and the special frighful experience.
Last week at the school , she told me that she will go to travel in France because there are many interesting places to visit and look. She is a young girl who studies in Grade 12 at S.W.2 school. First she went to the Airpory and take the Air France for going to there. It take about 12 hours on the aeroplane.
When she was on an aeroplane. She can heard the unusual sound from the left engine but nobody can heard it. After that she sleeping and she dream that the aeroplane will fall down to the sea at Bermuda Triangle from the problem of the left engine. So, she got up very quickly and try to told to another people but nobody listening to her voice because Air France was a superb airline in the world. So, no way to have a problem with it.
She felt very afraid and then the dream look like to be real because she can saw a fire in the left engine and captain said that we have a problem and must landing immediately. After about five minute an aeroplane fall down to the sea and explode very strongly. She told me that she can saw an angel came here to help her and another nine people.
After that she lose her consciousness for a long time, When she got up, she know that this is her home because she wasn't hurt from it. So, today she came to school for study and told the special experience and unbelievable story that she can survived from the fall down of Air France and she's been okay.

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